英语长句语病修改 During the

问题描述

During their university life, it is useful for them to join in colorful activities and develop their characters and abilities, such as do a part time job, to be a volunteer or a trainee and so on.

这句话有哪些语法错误？

老师答疑

刘老师：

你的句子还是不错的。我稍微改了一下：

During their university life, it is useful for them to join in colorful activities and develop their individual characters and abilities, such as doing a part-time job, working as a volunteer or a trainee, and so on.

【翻译】在他们大学生活期间，参加丰富多彩的活动，发展个性和能力，如做兼职工作，当志愿者或实习生等等，这都是非常有用的。