对廉价航空反对意见的描写（请老师批改）

问题描述

However, other people believe that the relatively affordable price has brought a lot of negative issues to the environment. They point out that the main impact of two, such as atmospheric pollution and energy consumption are the direct or indirect results of the cheap air travel .They say that cheap airlines in order to save the cost of flying, no longer provide food and drinks to the passengers, no longer provide books and magazines for passengers. It can greatly affect the comfort of passengers.In addition to has many disadvantages.

老师答疑

刘老师：

你的文章写得不错。里面有些小问题，我用红色标出，下一篇蓝色的地方是我改正过的，对照一下就知道为何错了。

However, other people believe that the relatively affordable price has brought a lot of negative issues to the environment. They point out that the main impact of two, such as atmospheric pollution and energy consumption are the direct or indirect results of the cheap air travel .They say that cheap airlines in order to save the cost of flying, no longer provide food and drinks to the passengers, no longerprovide books and magazines for passengers. It can greatly affect the comfort of passengers.In addition to has many disadvantages.

However, other people believe that the relatively affordable price has brought a lot of negative issues to the environment. They point out that their main impacts such as atmospheric pollution and energy consumption are the direct or indirect results of the cheap air travel .They say that in order to save the cost of flying, cheap airlines no longer provide food and drinks to the passengers, orprovide books and magazines for passengers. It can greatly affect the comfort of passengers. Besides, it has many disadvantages.