描述人物形容词名词集聚一体的句子该怎样表述

问题描述

老师这句话怎样修改更为准确？类似这样的句型该怎样表述？

He has shot curly black hair, small black eyes, a round face and a small nose.

老师答疑

曹老师：

He has shot curly black hair, small black eyes, a round face and a small nose.

修改：

He has short black curly hair, with a small nose and small black eyes on his round face.

追问:2017/04/30 00:41

I hadn't paid attention to him until he gave me a help. 这句话的时态对吗？

回答：这句话时态没有错误。

追问:2017/04/30 01:11

老师再请问，当指代同一个人时，应当说

She is my mother and my friend. 

还是 She is my mother and friend. 

回答：应该用第二句。没必要重复my。英语最忌讳没必要的重复。

追问:2017/04/30 01:53

请问如果我把句子变为：

She is slim, with short black hair, and balck eyes and a small nose. 这样表述对吗？

改为：She is a slim girl with short black hair, black eyes and a small nose.

加上girl，让with介词短语作定语。句子只用一个逗号，一个and.

追问:2017/04/30 02:06

He is a warm and intellegent, capable and generous but also hardworking people. 

请问我这样表述可以吗？

一个名词的前置定语一般很少超过三个，四个就是极限了。

people是复数，不能说He is a people. 改成形容词做表语。这样就避免了名词前过多的定语。

He is an intellegent, able man who is generous, warm-hearted and hardworking.