这些动词不是并列关系吧？

问题描述

On the other hand, if you consistently miss the goals, re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower as you will only get discouraged and probably give up. 上面的三个单词miss , re-evaluate,  consider不是并列关系吧？否则意思不通啊

老师答疑

陈老师：

On the other hand, if you consistently miss the goals,  re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower as you will only get discouraged and probably give up. 

改变以下句子语序

On the other hand, re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower as you will only get discouraged and probably give up if you consistently miss the goals.

参考译文：另一方面，如果你始终如一地/一贯地/坚持地错过目标，再次评估并考虑把目标设置的更低些，因为不料你会灰心/泄气并且很可能会中途放弃。

as 这里引导原因状语从句，as you will only get discouraged and probably give up 因为你会没有想到的泄气并很可能放弃

主句：(you) re-evaluate , and consider setting them a little lower

上面的三个单词miss , re-evaluate,  consider不是并列关系吧？否则意思不通啊

以上3个单词 属于3个并列谓语成分，属于 并列平行关系，第1属于从句谓语，后面2个属于主句谓语

状语：on the other hand

引导条件状语从句连词:if

从句主语：you

状语状语：consistently

从句谓语：miss

从句宾语：the goals

主句谓语:re-evaluate

连词：and

主句谓语：consider

主句宾语：setting them in a little lower

引导原因状语连词：as

从句谓语：will get 

从句状语：only

从句谓语:discourage

连词：and

从句谓语:give up

重点单词及短语解析如下:

(1)miss  vt. 错误，未实现；未注意到

(2)consistently   adv.一贯地，坚持地，固守地; 总是;

(3)re-revaluate   vt./vi再估价

(4)consider  vt.打算;考虑

(5)consider doing sth考虑做某事

(6)set  vt.设置，确定

(7)discourage  vt. 使泄气;使灰心

(8)get discouraged  感觉灰心

(9)only 不料，仅仅

(10)give up  放弃

(11)probably  adv.大概；或许；可能

(12)goal  n.目标；目的

(13)on the other hand另一方面

(14)set sth a little lower把某事设置更低些

                补充回答：

还有一种理解，就是按照刘老师的解答，把as去掉，因为整个句子缺少主句，如果去掉as 后，后面就是主句了

On the other hand, if you consistently miss the goals,  re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower( as多余，应该删掉） you will only get discouraged and probably give up. 

改变为下面的句子:

On the other hand, if you consistently miss the goals,  re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower， you will only get discouraged and probably give up. 

参考译文：另一方面，如果你总是与所设置的目标擦肩而过，并再次评估，并考虑将目的设置的更低些，你将会觉很灰心/沮丧并很有可能中途放弃。

(1)状语：on the other hand

(2)引导条件状语从句的连词:if

(3)条件状语从句:if you consistently miss the goals,  re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower

(条件状语从句3个谓语动词属于“并列平行”关系

(4)主句： you will only get discouraged and probably give up.

而且修改以后也符合，主将从现的“英语语法原则”

以上句子来自于下面文章

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刘老师：

On the other hand, if you consistently miss the goals, re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower as you will only get discouraged and probably give up.

【翻译】另一方面，如果你不断地跟自己的目标失之交臂，然后重新作出评估，再考虑把目标设置的更低一些，那么，你就会丧失信心，很可能会放弃。

【分析】我认为，as 多余，应删掉。因为有了as，就是个错句！—— 没有主句的句子。去掉as后，if you consistently miss the goals, re-evaluate, and consider setting them a little lower 是条件从句，you will only get discouraged and probably give up 是主句。

的确，if 从句的3个谓语动词是并列的，只是原句缺少了主句。这样改正后才是完美的句子。